Little White Lies

I think its time for us to say "goodbye"

because I'm sick and tired

of trying to understand your lame alibis

and picking up the pieces of my broken heart,

after hearing your heart wrenching little white lies



I know you say that you can't live without me

and that I'm the air that you breath

but honey, why can't you see

you've asked me for a second chance,

to many more times than three.



I'm now saying my final goodbye

and that is all that's happening

I'm walking,with a broken heart, away from your sad alibis

and keeping my tears on lock down

whne I tell you I don't love you, my little white lie.

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Meg's picture

well robyn, this is the poem you had me read in english class today and i really liked it then and i just read it again and i like it even more. the rhythm is fantastic, and the way you placed the rhymes is brilliant. you portray a very strong emotion message thingy (hehe i'm tired so sorry for my weird word choices) and you do it well. woohooo!
my only critique is to fix the typo on the last line.
i read some of your other poems and they are fantastic as well. anywho, i'm out, ttyl. -meg