Slowly I'm drowning
in my unshed tears.
Tears of pain,
anger, fear,
and, most of all
tears of anguish
I'm chocking on frustration
as it curls like smoke,
smoke from a fire
being fanned within my lungs
blocking oxygen,
stopping breath.
I'm falling,
endlessly falling
into the oblivion of promises.
Promises made by you
to me.
Unfulfilled promises
made by you.
I'm dying,
(slowly,ever so slowly)
in my dreams
the dreams that are plagued,
plagued by you;
your cursing words
I am gone;
disappeared;
vanished;
are you looking
looking high,
looking low,
looking left,
looking right,
looking for what?
AIR?
I am no more. even when I stand in front of you.
perfect... yeah its a good poem with rich idea and sweet composition of words... the way you did it is nice and heart feeling of course... so I can say that you are a good poet with sweet poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?