Always awake,
An insomniac
A quiet and exhausted child -> Whats with the child?
Needing a break to take. -> need break
No time to stop,
Worries galore
Fear running through her blood -> veins, not blood, since blood flows in veings, nothing can flow in blood unless its inter-cellular liquids :P Science meets Grammar
Can’t even stop, to look at a(take out the "a" and replace it by "the") clock.
Always awake,
An insomniac
A quiet and exhausted child -> Whats with the child?
Needing a break to take. -> need break
No time to stop,
Worries galore
Fear running through her blood -> veins, not blood, since blood flows in veings, nothing can flow in blood unless its inter-cellular liquids :P Science meets Grammar
Can’t even stop, to look at a(take out the "a" and replace it by "the") clock.