the end

going on aimlessly
there's no where to run
looking out helplessly
there's no body to turn

sorrow pain destruction
everywhere
no beauty left
any where

it's the end of life
where land meets the sky

there's only one man left
wandering about
among the remains of humanity
scattered around

moving and wondering
his weak legs bears him
sorrowful and frustrating
there's nothing left for him

it's the end of life
where land meets the sky

he remembers his past
his family his home
but nothing ever lasts
everything has gone

but he was let to go
from the clutches of darkness
an he is left all by himself
left all alone

it's the end of life
where land meets the sky

Author's Notes/Comments: 

well this is a sad poem but if we read it in a different outlook we can see that it motivates us to some extent.i am awaiting for your comments please tell me how was my poem.please

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demigodess's picture

i agree with izu :p

i agree with izu :p


~Grass is green~ <^>

izu's picture

its really a sad one, but  i

its really a sad one, but  i think the emphasis created by the repetation of the theme is what interests me most, and something i may have to experiment with.