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Rose Garden
You're beauty is more perfect than that of a thousand rose gardens. Without you, my life would surely be hardened. So walk with me through those gardens, hand and hand we will find new lands, We'll settle down, you and I and our love will soar thru the skies. No evil will hurt us, no evil will find us. Our love will form an unbreakable trust. This bond we share together, will make our love last forever.
This is a nice one, well
This is a nice one, well done!
thank you!
thank you!
Robert Kalilainen
Better
the story/images are consistent. Love those cliches...you missed forever and a day, untilI I die, and forever and ever (these are overworked and a sign that the poet steps back from creating). I encourge and challenge you to be better - Lady A