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The Dream

My message is for you women caught up in the scene
Try and keep your heads up and you’ll be seen
And there for you remain the arch of a wonderful queen
And my message is for you women still awaiting on that wonderful dream.

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last updated 16 February 2013 - 11:38pm
©4 April 2004 - 10:35pm — robbo
27 April 2004 - 2:18pm — Kylie Oakley (not verified)
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Michael this is a realy great piece of writing and very close to home keep up the good work xxxxx

22 April 2004 - 10:13am — Jayden Mcfarlen (not verified)
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That's very beautiful.

12 April 2004 - 9:36pm — Ruth G (not verified)
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I really liked this poem it means alot to me. My friends sister got raped when she was only 14.

9 April 2004 - 4:01am — Nikki Astling (not verified)
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I just wanted to say that this poem has a very good meaning underneath it, and ppl can take a lot from it. My stepdad had tried to rape me when I was younger, so this really touched me....Keep up the good work!