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Sorry i wrote this...
I’ve a song with no words,
Do you mind hearing it?
May be no proper rhythm too,
But still i look forward, if
anyone could hold my hand,
get closer to me
and dance.
“What a fool?”,She said,
“Why?”, I implored.
“You got to have words”
“i did have but lost’em.”
“Why didn’t you lose a whole song instead?”,She asked.
I looked down and couldn’t dare to answer that.
With guilt and disgrace-filled eyes,
I sang alone.
She left.
I like it
It reads as if it is the reader in the poem.
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Thanks a lot.. glad you went
Thanks a lot.. glad you went though my stuffs
Meaningful Dialogue
your poems are little short stories too. nice too is the song without words that were lost. ~~A~~
I am happy you figured out
I am happy you figured out the story here...
Just Re-Read
It is a plus when I read a poem later, there is so much more which is the mark of an excellent craftweilder of words. Nice write ~Lady A~
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Everytime I see your comments
Everytime I see your comments I start to think I am good at this when I'm not. Thank you ever-encouraging-soul. :)
With Each Write
You get better until you become really good and then become a master and then become an authority. Your more recent poems are masterful and well constructed - ttyl - slc
Thank you
Long long way to go for me. Hope to see the light.