What am I doing I can not see
A red cloud blocks my view
leaving fantasies far and few.
Must not act and try to hide
all the regret I have inside.
It burns at my mind
a hot red steel rod.
The wrench has been thrown in
it breaks up the gears.
It tears me away inside
a little each day, what must I pay?
A universe unnamed fun and games
plots and frames each with a little shame.
I must stay more true
I can't do this, not to you.
Why oh why does self conscience
subside, leaving a small devil inside?
She fills my head with deceitful things
try to cause my untimely yet inevitable defeat.
My vision is blurred
I can not see
please someone explain this to me.
very sweet and professionally done this poem... sure I am not wrong if I say you are good poet with new subjects to express... hope you will like my expression of love based peace thoughts too( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with.... afzal shauq ) hope my this famous say is the only answer to your questions raising in your mind about the happiest collective life.... yeah... we belong to same family of Adam...and we are true cousins..indeed