Minus the Self

Fill my cracked glass bottles,

Pour there earth and blood, 

Water them with tears and sweat,

Watching the city civilizations

Bloom stone and gold,

Iron, steel, smoke and ash. 

Feed them famine, pain and pleasure.

 

For there lie the bones of mortals past

Their lives to fast for us to follow,

The individual, forgotten,

Swept into the sky and air

Torn by winds that twist,

Shredding all in their path.

 

The flesh, the temple stripped bare of it's lies,

The disguise worn by the immortal soul

Wastes away, shirveled. Rots, decomposing

Futility of vanity while yet alive,

Reconciles old age to wisdom

Where there is sometimes none to be found.

 

And so I'll carve my name into the sand,

Scream it to the raging winds,

Fill the oceans with my ink, my blood,

And the forests with my songs,

Though none will recall them

Save the birds.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Time tends to forget the individual, except for those that truly make an impact. To be remembered is to be truly immortal.

Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

I can't say whether they'll

I can't say whether they'll remember you or not. I can say that I will remember you till the end of my days. While that won't make you immortal I hope you realize to many have strive to be remembered when they should of just been striving to live. I truly believe George Washington, MLK Jr., Gandhi, Da Vinci, Socrates, and several others weren't overly concerned with their legacy but instead concerned with doing, whatever that was. This is wonderfully written. Please keep writing and who knows perhaps you'll be immortal after all...


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

ReilaMorello's picture

Thank you.

As I shall remember you. And it's more that I believe that the memories we leave behind, the things we do, our legacies...These are the things that will be remembered by society and generations to come. The individual is forgotten by time and slowly erodes. "So I'll carve my name into the sand.." I'll keep writing and creating no matter whether I'll be remembered or not. =) You do the same.

millyardo's picture

bravo ms, these are words

bravo ms, these are words that maKe paper golden. thank you for the read, i love this. LOVE THIS!