Shaky sigh and a prayer
Your breath fanning my lips
Fist clenched in my hair
I know you don't mean this.
Your palm flat on my back
My fingers dance on your sides,
We're both feeling the lack
Of the passion that died.
You've been desperate and angry
And I'm scared and confused,
But there's not enough time.
We've nothing left to lose.
The world isn't kind,
We both know that too well.
And it isn't hard to find
A ticket to hell.
But he wouldn't want this,
You know that as well as I.
So smile and call me "Little Miss"
Without your death in your eyes.
You've been desperate and angry
And I'm scared and confused,
But there's not enough time.
We've nothing left to lose.
And it's been years now
Since you've been gone,
And still somehow,
I'm moving on.
It's been rough,
I can't deny it.
World's still tough,
I miss you, I admit.
But I can stand on my own now
And there are new people
Who will catch me
If I fall.
You were desperate and angry,
I was scared and confused.
But there wasn't enough time,
You had nothing left to lose.
I love it. It has a strong
I love it. It has a strong meaning about what it is you can think feel or see. It's very well written. It stirs ideas and memories. Thank you.
~free~
great! the song in my head
great! the song in my head was brilliant! I really liked the structure and the subtle changes in the verse. very cool!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Gone Finally
You have nothing to lose/You had nothing to lose - such balance. Message strong, the style nice. Enjoyed, kinda blue with redemption and freedom finally. Cool write, this.
.~Lady A~