Empty Hopes

Broken images stitched together by an injured heart
Fallen hard from the land of dreams
Reality hits me hard like a wave 
The mess I planned in my head
Held the knife to my skull 
Planted scars of empty hopes
Now a rush of pain runs in my veins
Scattered dreams wet with tears 
Drilling the hole to my torment
Innocent eyes were not to blame
For the mistakes myself have made
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I could almost feel the pain whilst reading this, let the author inside you bleed out the pain through your writing. this piece is so full of emotion.


 

I aplogeise if you feel my poems are not correctly standardised or grammatically perfect - dark, too detailed, etc... Alot of my writing just flows all in one, so I try not to edit it afterwards otherwise I start changing the work- which h