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High school ultiamte rox
everybodys sox
catch, pass
kick some ass
go geese!
like dough with lots a yeast
we are gargantuine
thats right were gargantuin!
we run alot
it makes me really hot
even more than i really am
cause im so hot im gon take my clothes off, dam
i like frisby thats right
and my friends got hight
i got speed
and we dont smoke weed
but thats ok
cause its may
and now its legal
to go get high, like a seagull
we catch the disk
at our own dam risk.
we like to dive
we feel alive
du ultimate du ultimate
du ultimate du ultimate
its a sweet game
a really sweet game
thats right ultimate
throwing catching
running fetching
thats is what we do
on the field
the mighty field
we play all day
oh yay
it is so fun
when ur with one
that ur thinkin of
its kinda like luv
a luv for this game
like a great dame
it can go on and on
kind a like mowin the lawn
there is always one more time.
only problem is that the seasons change
we only have a short range
to play the game
hear hear to ultimate
the sweetest game around
where to start.... you really need to work with the rhyme scheme again..... and then maybe take out that whole section on getting "high like a seagull"... please do not change it to "high like an eagle"..... also.... mowing the lawn??? what does that have to do with the poem??? and what the hell is ultimate... the spelling could use some work too, people are going to start thinking you're dyslexic. On the bright side, i almost wet my pants i was laughing so hard.
LMAO! This is HALARIOUS! I luv it!! And Ultimate soooo does rock! Its the best sport in the whole world!!