Admonitions to an emerging poet

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1. Keep Writing, Whatever Comes


Just keep writing, day by day,

Let words fall out, however they may.

The ink will guide you, though unsure,

In every line, a voice grows pure.

 

2. Engage with Poems and Poets


In the world of verse, connect, be bold,

Talk with others, both young and old.

Their words will teach, their lives inspire,

Fuel the flame that burns your fire.

 

3. Embrace Rejection, It’s Part of the Game


Expect the no’s, the "not quite right,"

Rejection’s a shadow, not a blight.

We are not all the same cup of tea,

Nor is every poet meant for you.

 

4. Grow in Your Craft


With every word, with every line,

Grow your skills, refine your mind.

Knowledge will deepen, wisdom will show,

As you practice, your art will grow.

 

5. Control Your Rewards


Don’t wait for praise, don’t seek the gold,

Satisfaction’s yours, in stories told.

The joy is found in what you create,

Not in others’ judgment, not in their rate.

 

6. Welcome Good Critique


When feedback’s good, embrace the chance,

To learn, to grow, to dance the dance.

But discard the noise that doesn’t speak,

The truth is found in voices meek.

 

7. Be Kind to Yourself and Others


In the struggle, in the fight,

Be kind to self, keep the heart light.

Give grace to others, as you’d ask,

For kindness, friend, is its own task.

 

8. Keep Your Eyes Open


Look within, and look outside,

In both the still and the rolling tide.

The world will speak if you just see,

The poetry in all that’s free.

 

9. Enjoy the Journey


The path is winding, slow at times,

But joy is found in rhythm, rhyme.

Even struggle’s scent will lead the way,

In verse, there’s beauty in the fray.

 

10. Trust in Your Process


So write your truth, and write it loud,

Your voice will rise above the crowd.

The world may not understand just yet,

But keep writing—you’re not done, not set.


 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Was approached rather directly by a young & emerging poet about the craft & its process, out came this admonition that covers quite a spread of the territory; it’s far from being the be-all & end-all.

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S74RW4RD's picture

This is brilliant, and

This is brilliant, and perfect---except for the single use of the word "thee" in a poem where "you/your" dominate.  You are so good at Poetry that the "thee" must certainly be an oversight.


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Thank you for ppointing out

Thank you for ppointing out that inconsistency.


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I truly wish a poem like this

I truly wish a poem like this had been available in October, 1975, when I first experienced the urge to become a Poet.  This Poem, in its shimmering magnificence, is and will be a guiding star to young Poets.  I believe that this one of the most important poems on this site.


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textbook, i can easily

textbook, i can easily imagine finding this in textbooks for a poetry course, it's works that well


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That would be both a

That would be both a privilege and an honour, if it were to be so: a service to the education of our future generations. Thanks kindly


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