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I
wonder where my resolve,
apathy, and
never ending callousness 
tangle together
towards some sort 
of ominous presage,
beckoning me closer,
eroding part of my 

desire 

eradicating all of my 
ambition
deviously

 

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SSmoothie's picture

Sounds like my battle with

Sounds like my battle with poetry and writing. I'd rather write poetically or poetry than 2 dollar bookstore escapism. The reality of a situation often undermines the dream of the vision.  It's easier to make excuses than a difference. Thank God for the choice of discipline.  Cause you know what that is eh? It's choosing to do the right thing even when you have every excuse not to. The proviso being there's no excuse for not doing the right thing. Great writing. It's succinct and thought provoking. I don't care how you meant it, I love what I understand of it ;) cheers Ss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Carcass's picture

I want to be dead too, man.

I want to be dead too, man. Well, only sometimes haha

allets's picture

A Whirlwind Write

The surprise is that the "balancing" emotional props and character traits are at risk of being siphoned, filtered, renewed, and refined - old conceptions should be challenged periodically. If found wanting or insufficient to the goals matrix, new ones can be tried on. Grow poet! ~ allets ~