im a wilted garden in need of some water

i ask myself why i do this yo!

wasting life like a coach potato

down? is it the only way to go?

clouded wmotions hide the sun

even when it glows

these negetive emotions

keep bombarding

me, preventing me

from exploring lifes garden

im soft on the inside

so i let my shell harden

for letting someone in

may compromise my heart in

ways i dont wanna get into

because of the old flame i went through

been burned beyond repair

i ask "what would new skin do?"

i tell myself "man, even aloe vera couldnt mend you."

i spend through my paycheck quicker than 0 to 60 in 3

not a dollar to my name, crime, i feel like its calling to me

like my parents path through them i lived that vicariously

i just fell like its just i and the worlds against me!

 

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Haha! This brought a smile to

Haha! This brought a smile to my face because your style is wak! I love that! Good luck ;) great read! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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haha it wiggidy wak, i hope

haha it wiggidy wak, i hope you meant that in a good way. thanks for the luck wishin!!!

SSmoothie's picture

How could you think any thing

How could you think any thing else! a little wacky in everyone's day makes everything seem better in some way! ;D loved it. 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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straight up ssmoothie, im

straight up ssmoothie, im definately wacky

normal aint my thang social outcast=happy

nightlight1220's picture

Thank you

Thanks, I enjoyed reading it.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Feelings

The poet explores feelings shallow and deep. But no one, NO ONE can make you feel other than you want to feel. Except poets, of course. Hang in there - rejection is not the end, it is experience to prepare you for the next one - in this world - it takes a while to find the right partner. ~~A~~