anti-depressent

i walk to my room and lay on my bed.

i hate the thoughts that always run through my head.

thoughts of suiside, and wanting to die.

the pain hurts so much i cant help but to cry.

but then i met you and you turned me around.

you took my whole life and turned it up-side-down.

i fell in love with you and you took away my heart.

i swore up and down that we would never part.

but baby i messed up and i left your side.

i got so scarred i just wanted to hide.

but even then you never let me down.

every where i looked you could always be found.

your my anti-depressent you keep me safe from all harm.

you stopped me so many times from putting cuts on my arm.

your always there for me no matter what the time.

that is why im so glad to call you mine.


Author's Notes/Comments: 

you are the missing peices to my heart!

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Alex Weavers's picture

Recommend a once over with a spell-check, and perhaps you would be more suited to prose. There is no sense in making something rhyme when it doesn't need too, and in fact I think that the line breaks and the rhyming and stuff clearly detract here.

In other news, there are more fish in the sea than can possibly come of it; I wouldn't worry about one particular guy, and I can think of better compliments than anti-depressant.