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Death Poems "counter action"
saw you pop that dude yesterday
saw you smile, satisfaction,
heard the laugh, no reaction
saw the blood splash, beat his ass then
add another bullet to please your faction
but heres the counter action
what about mom's contraction
her babys dead, murdered for killing passion
all dogg did was look at your girl, showed attraction
so simple, so minor, did not warrant deaths retraction
now you have that memory, its called gods satisfaction
this is your punishment, thoughts everlastin
one day you'll get a counter action
i love reading your poems... this one showed a lot of what life really is today. how people freak over the simplest things and take a life not stopping to think of anyone else... nicely written
Newton's Third Law! It's all there in air, we don't stop to ponder the same. Well written. It's a pleasure to go through you lines.