Coming to age

The endless waves roll as infinite time rolls...
A peek into the past's howls, a peak in the futures growls..
Above it all an orange sky with a far cry, strolls..
And here behold a blistered man floating aboard a boat..
Neither in future nor in past, on a boat with a timeless mast.

To him the waves upholds, the universe's echoes;
A sound from far, etched deep into his heart..
A heavenly tremor brought to the open shallows;
'Open to the open, open to the closed!': it parts,
Neither in future nor in past, on a boat with a timeless mast.

Reality breaks in, calamity breaks out,
The boat's carved on time's ways and sways to its plays.
In the 18th year, it sinks..alas!
Just another another drop in the crowd..
But his spirit still haunts in his faded rays,
Neither in future nor in past, on a boat with a timeless mast...

-RKK

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8 mre to 100!

8 mre to 100!

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merci beaucoup to evry1! ^_^

merci beaucoup to evry1! ^_^

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Amazing

I found myself mesmorized by the story being told here. It is relateable to me, just floating in time without being disturbed until finally you have to be.

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Thnks fr ur feedback!

thanks a lot for ur views and comment! i realli appreciate it! :)

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wow!

46 views on my frst post!
Thnks a lot ppl!
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my frst poem guys! pls do gv

my frst poem guys! pls do gv sme feedback! :)