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WHORE
Horrid Whore
You who were the saving Whore.
The one brought everything to herself
In the mold of a happy Whore.
Ghastly Whore
Because you expel those
Who would be your Whore.
Scheming whore
Because you scheme schemes
Which will breed the drama
Which you will fuck
You fuck.
The Whore
Who brought so much
So much that broke so many skins
On people who were supposedly still virgins.
Uncaring Whore
Because you’re numb now.
Feeble Whore
Because it is your point of view which matters.
Sympathetic Whore
This has been your life.
Nasty Whore
The STD’s have spread.
According to my rather limited understanding, I believe that this poem pertains to the "life cycle" of a whore. Or maybe its the multiple facets of a stereotypical whore? right?
Anyway.... I thingk its a good poem. the build-up is good and the finale sends a strong message. gotta work on the profanity though. It doesn't give the reader a strong message. It just makes the reader think that youre writing a rap song or youre from the mafia. give me a holler
i liked this one.
i feel like we should be snapping our fingers and wearing black berets and eating coffee beans down at the local cafe.