CAN YOU CALL IT RAPE YET?

Can you call it rape yet?

Should the lord protect sheep, regardless of soul?

Fickle; like the night which lasted forever.

Barren; like the mother who must be mine forever.



Should the lord protect sheep, regardless of human soul?

Its death to those who would live their life,

Barren like the mother who must be mine forever;

Like a despotic fire, craddling water forever.



Its death to those who would live their life.

Rabbits remember having feet once, gasping to feel the void

Like a despotic fire, craddling water forever.

The priest scorned some eunich, wasted legacy.



Rabbits remember having feet once, gasping to feel the void;

Mountains are hurt by the elevation

The priest scorned some eunich, wasted legacy,

Can you call it rape yet?

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kris's picture

you're really quite talented. I couldnt decide which was my favorite, but for some reason i decided on this one. so there you are, and here I am.

Mary Jane's picture

I've learned to avoid discussions on religious issues...:)