16 September 2003 - 12:04am — Kala Bennett (not verified)
Well written, I like this one, simple but the point gets accross, although not everything in life is as easy as this poem makes it out to be, sometimes influence, forcefull contacts and such things like that make us do things we don't want to do.
Good work
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Well written, I like this one, simple but the point gets accross, although not everything in life is as easy as this poem makes it out to be, sometimes influence, forcefull contacts and such things like that make us do things we don't want to do.
Good work
ps. check out my poems and critique
Well penned, but as you get older, not all things you do may be what you like, but out of respect you do it anyway. Linda