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take it
Yes, take it.
take my heart and burn it.
take it and destroy it
i dont need it.
it weakens me.
it wont let me be.
it just wont let me flee.
it hurts me, it pains me,
it ruins me and saddens me.
it controls me and destroys me.
So take it.
take it and let me be
Nice
First, let me welcome you to our family here at Postpoems!
I found your poem to be full of emotion that is coddled in one simplistic stanza. It is short and to the point, I like that! I have written some 6 liners in my time such as the one entitled "My demise", so much can be said in so few words and you really did it here in this poem. Your poetic potential is intriguing! keep writting and please keep sharing!
echo
We have wonderful people in my town named Haddad....
your poem is a sublime tribute to freedom
your poem creates echoes in us
thank you! :) first poem i
thank you! :)
first poem i ever post!