...Si Do Re...

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Si Do Re, S'il Vous Plait
This domain, I go crazed,
Opened gates, focused gaze,
Loco state of slow-mo grace.
A fantasy, languishing
Anguish-ly.
Anger and pain,
Ankles in chains,
Aimlessly, candidly,
Can it be...
What I planned to see?
Amphetamine, it's affecting me 'lectro-chemically,
The venom in me, so unpleasantly,
Unsuspecting of me,
This insanity...
It's everywhere,
I'm ever aware my every stare into every glare,
Did I ever care!
This revered pair - our feverish air,
A severed terrace...
Your devilish grins,
We reveled in sins of ravishing prints,
Unrivaled since.
Stifling screams, unbridled dreams,
Spiraled meanings, cycling themes.
Passing seconds, lasting minutes,
Passioned essence, collapsing limits,
Staggered entrance, claps in exits,
Hazardous transgressions of irrational analytics.
An open wound,
Coherent tune,
A potent truth in a golden tomb,
A moment soon,
Approaching groan,
Encroaching looms of souls be strewn.
Repeats ol' phrase of "We'll be OK."
Please, so say
Thee, behold, stay
Me? No way,
Flee, go away.
See... Hope... Pray...
Si... Do... Re...

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sanctus's picture

You should befriend that old

You should befriend that old and gentle art of punctuation. Without it, your self-proclaimed "poem" reads like utter gibberish

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lol... thanks for the

lol... thanks for the recommendation, I do share a closer bond with my pal, sarcasm.