Abandoned

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Alone in the midst of chaos to wallow in my own despair

My only companionship falls to the shadows dancing in the darkness

Pure stubbornness demands super human strength

As the unbearable pain consumes all that I have left to give

Here in the silence each breath becomes ever so cumbersome

Excruciating pain pulsates through my veins like a plague

And even the desire to eat has fled me

Will the hole in my womb heal or shall it forever restrict my heart

Watching as the blood drips from the stitches in my arm reality sets in

And treacherous tears burn slowly down my cheeks

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Jason Daffron's picture

hey! wow i really like this. it is so dark. good job on the imagery. ~Jason

raminastar's picture

Man did I miss this one~`

I am so sorry I never saw this comment!!!!! Thank you and I so happy you liked it. It was a hard time in my life and I could not believe how it came out on paper. I am actually really proud of this poem :) Thanks for commenting and reading!

Afzal Shauq's picture

perfect... its very good piece with rixh theme and like it very much... very sweet way you did... thanks for comments and hope ou go through my poems too and comment in detailed way to add to my new book... take care

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Thank you Afzalshauq :)

Thank you Afzalshauq :)