Empty Silence

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There is a shattering screaming,

A sound so deafening, beaming,

Reaching strait through my tired soul,

Leaving me dieng here bleeding,



This silence is killing me,

From this torture I cannot flee,

I reach out to be rescued,

Yet as a speck no one can see,



I have found myself falling,

The dark abyss is now calling,

This is nothing here to slow me,

From this weight I've been hauling.

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Afzal Shauq's picture

a good poem with meangiful theme and really like it and love your words which omit the reality... its your identity telling the truth...welcome for comments and hope you never stop commenting my best friend... here is my famosu say to remeber and pass on to your fans and friends ... ((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with... afzal shauq )))mean I am peace wisher and ish the world in peace on the path of love and humantarian ground

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I am glad you like it

I am glad you like it Afzalshauq