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Seeing You Go!
I am surrounded by hostility
Eight to ten hours a day.
You are the only positive vibes
That surrounds me everyday.
The world I roam around
Is not where I wanted to be
I am actually trapped
Not by choice but because I need to stay .
With all the misery
That haunts me
You bring me positive energy
to deal with this along the way.
But the moment has to come.
You as well, will go away.
The one who lifts me up
Every moment, I wanted to stop.
.
Seeing you go is painful
But it will be selfish of me
If I hope that you will stay
For something out there is more wonderful.
I just wish you my friend
That you will never forget me
That you will still be there
To lift me up if I surrender.
All I want to say is to take care
And just so you know
That you have been so dear
Your impact to me is so much to let it go.
I will miss you so much!
Have to go
Is/not were - you have verb tense issues. Farewells are hard, putting down the emotion left behind is difficult: You said goodbye,/I felt abandoned/ you got on the train/ I felt like tracks leading in the opposite direction/ you promised to write/and you did for a few months/you said goodbye/now I know it was forever - The story and the feeling...Lady A
Ooops!
Gee...Thanks for pointing my mistakes...didn't even notice it. ...Kiks
Kiks