things are not as simple as they seem.
i know i'm jumping into suicide
half of me doesn't care
i couldn't look away from your self-inflicted, dazed helplessness
even though i just got rid of the last shard of glass left behind for me to hold to
a whole new set of scars
starting with that mindless embrace
and unconscious rambling about
me and
you and
pills and
sleepless nights
So they've pretty much said it all, but this is an amazing poem. you do a good job
i know i'm jumping into suicide
and unconscious rambling about
me and
you and
pills and
sleepless nights
I'm glad you've written. Nobody else has. Nothing good anyway. I miss good poetry. Everything after "tha blunt" was a haze. Thank you, though. You did pretty dang well.
i know i'm jumping into suicide
a whole new set of scars
starting with that mindless embrace
very nice. best in awhile :-D