while you're sleeping, i drown.
you lie with your eyes closed,
drifting through your happy dreams of everyone who isn't
me...
smiling at all the others.
you erased me a long time ago.
i wish i could have you feel what i feel for you,
and the way it feels to
burn
like i do,
and the way it feels to be
erased.
the more i figure out,
the more i understand,
the less sense it all makes.
no rest, there you'll still be.
none of my waking hours pass without you.
every night i wait under the streetlights
for someone to remember my name.
Lovely poem .
I have to agree
finished or not, it's fantastic