22 February 2006 - 1:01am — Colin McNamara (not verified)
I thought this was pretty cool... short but melancholic way of an angel (or person) who is stubborn and defies the normality of life and is shunned for it, sometimes wonderin if she/ he did the right thing... I dunno if that was the interpretation you were offerin... but it's what I read of it. I also like the spider imagery with the lashes... shows kind of a dark and creepy/ misunderstood persona of the fallen angel.
good work
on this one :*) .
I thought this was pretty cool... short but melancholic way of an angel (or person) who is stubborn and defies the normality of life and is shunned for it, sometimes wonderin if she/ he did the right thing... I dunno if that was the interpretation you were offerin... but it's what I read of it. I also like the spider imagery with the lashes... shows kind of a dark and creepy/ misunderstood persona of the fallen angel.
hey thinks for writing a poem about the FaLLen Angel that is me well my Nickname is.....