fallen angel

Folder: 
primitive

stubborn mindset

ashes of regret

see my eyes through

your full autumn

there's a world full of

seasons dull

lashes thickened

spiders crawl

your mind is dead

your soul has bled

your eyes cannot open

fallen angel

fallen angel

Author's Notes/Comments: 

hmm.

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poetvg's picture

good work
on this one :*) .

Colin McNamara's picture

I thought this was pretty cool... short but melancholic way of an angel (or person) who is stubborn and defies the normality of life and is shunned for it, sometimes wonderin if she/ he did the right thing... I dunno if that was the interpretation you were offerin... but it's what I read of it. I also like the spider imagery with the lashes... shows kind of a dark and creepy/ misunderstood persona of the fallen angel.

Stephan Fay's picture

hey thinks for writing a poem about the FaLLen Angel that is me well my Nickname is.....