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wishing

wanting

sleep

to close my eyes

to fall asleep

leaning

against you

to fall asleep

in

your arms

in

a warm place

forever

and ever

never

waking up

and if

i

happen to awake

i find

myself

holding you

in that place

that warm place

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this was inspired by the nine inch nails song "a warm place" (and no, i didn't steal any words.. the song is instrumental)  ;)
well, this was written for a certain someone who i really don't like now, but i will leave this here anyways.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 1:26am
©30 July 2001 - 7:06am — raina_3
31 January 2002 - 3:54am — Misty Lackey (not verified)
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yes, I am glad you left this one on here. a good love poem to read.

31 July 2001 - 7:06am — ugonna
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We all need "a warm place", Jessica. There is a wonderful beauty of the human spirit and cherishment in these lines: "leaning against you to fall asleep in your arms in a warm place forever..." Thank you so much, Jessica, for giving humanity "a warm place", uniquely yours! Ugonna