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I pronounce exclamations while

my dangling participle is trapped

between your parenthesis

interjections of Ooh! and Aah!

coordinate conjunctions

connecting excited emotions

that adjectives have a

hard time describing



I preposition myself to

recieve all of your

vigorous verbs

you charge imperative commands

that derive declarative remarks

in complex form



my grammar becomes ebonofied

with each compound phrase

I utter incomplete sentences

with your ink of life

and my pen to write

together we compose essays

succeeded by beautiful poems



we find love



we incite love



we recite love



we make love

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Inspired by a poet named Amberly. She wrote a poem entitled 'Prostitutin My Words' which I think is phenominal. Thank you Amberly for your inspiration.

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©26 November 2002 - 1:42am — raila
5 May 2004 - 4:47pm — Katherine Neitz (not verified)
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I utter incomplete sentences
with your ink of life
and my pen to write
together we compose essays
succeeded by beautiful poems

That was my favorite part of this poem...I just like the way it flows :)

27 November 2002 - 9:34pm — Kelly Fields (not verified)
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this one is still giving me quivers....love this piece rai

27 November 2002 - 6:39pm — Tawanda Roberson (not verified)
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damn luv...i really like this

26 November 2002 - 6:27am — Joy Williams (not verified)
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Man, oh Man... This one is even tighter than Amberly's!!! I had to print this one hot off the PRESS!!! This one has to go in MY Poem book (of course with due credit given to you!) I thought I liked "You are my Poem" but this one has got that one beat... I hate to choose one work over another, but this time you have left me with no choice. Much respect. Due respect.

26 November 2002 - 2:25am — Netta Jack (not verified)
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MASTERPIECE!!!!

26 November 2002 - 2:16am — Tawanda Roberson (not verified)
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DAMN LUV!!! This is tight....very creative...and your flow...lovely. I love the way you chose to place your words. Yeah...this piece is definitely hot!