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Excited Utterance
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Erotica I pronounce exclamations while
my dangling participle is trapped
between your parenthesis
interjections of Ooh! and Aah!
coordinate conjunctions
connecting excited emotions
that adjectives have a
hard time describing
I preposition myself to
recieve all of your
vigorous verbs
you charge imperative commands
that derive declarative remarks
in complex form
my grammar becomes ebonofied
with each compound phrase
I utter incomplete sentences
with your ink of life
and my pen to write
together we compose essays
succeeded by beautiful poems
we find love
we incite love
we recite love
we make love
I utter incomplete sentences
with your ink of life
and my pen to write
together we compose essays
succeeded by beautiful poems
That was my favorite part of this poem...I just like the way it flows :)
this one is still giving me quivers....love this piece rai
damn luv...i really like this
Man, oh Man... This one is even tighter than Amberly's!!! I had to print this one hot off the PRESS!!! This one has to go in MY Poem book (of course with due credit given to you!) I thought I liked "You are my Poem" but this one has got that one beat... I hate to choose one work over another, but this time you have left me with no choice. Much respect. Due respect.
MASTERPIECE!!!!
DAMN LUV!!! This is tight....very creative...and your flow...lovely. I love the way you chose to place your words. Yeah...this piece is definitely hot!