9 November 2002 - 7:06pm — Rachel Marie Tate (not verified)
This was a very touching and lovely piece, exactly describing how I feel towards the light of my life, my little son, my everything, my reason for being, my pride and joy. What a delight reading this. Through it's regulated amount of syllables you still manage to convey deep emotion and love...:-)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww how sweet
Wow i say this is a 5-star poem. Being a parent too,
i can really well relate to this particular one.
Thumps up for this.
This was a very touching and lovely piece, exactly describing how I feel towards the light of my life, my little son, my everything, my reason for being, my pride and joy. What a delight reading this. Through it's regulated amount of syllables you still manage to convey deep emotion and love...:-)