Bite Me If You Can

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My flow

hypnotic

mentally neurotic

I got your girl

erotic - ly

thinking of me

fantasizing of what

it would be

like

to hike

up my hill

wanting to feel

every word I spit

from these luscious lips

while you bite my ass

wishing you had

the style that I have

sitt'n there wish'n

you could do it

I'm so tight I plagerize

my own shit

you might say

you find it cliche

that I rhyme this way



it doesn't make a difference

because my phonetic style

and infinite intellect

will carry this poem

to higher heights

leaving you stranded in

a lyrical abyss



I hope you didn't miss

how I just did this

how I jumped back in

to this floetic blend

to lend

you some insight

on how I keeps it right

be an originator

don't fuck'n bite

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Lasohnda Harris's picture

this was tight I likes

Karyn Indursky's picture

I'm amused and laughing at this poem. Personally, I'd just bite you, but I don't bite asses. Maybe, your arm or finger to play this game of yours. But this is a good humor poem and I appreciate it's lighthearted texture.

Tawanda Roberson's picture

this is hot!! i had never read this one nice...very nice

strawberrylagoon's picture

Did you post this on Def Poetry? This is dope!

Shanita Johnson's picture

The flow on this piece was tight. The message was superb..

Cathrine Johnson's picture

Damn! True,True!! You broke it down! Poetic pimp daddy style. I like it a lot. Very nice flow!