12 May 2004 - 1:11am — Karyn Indursky (not verified)
Great poem, but I have a complaint. With the subject matter and lines of your poem along with the title, you shouldn't be using COME, but CUM. I think it'd be more appropiate and interesting. Just a suggestion, but as always this is an amazing piece.
Great poem, but I have a complaint. With the subject matter and lines of your poem along with the title, you shouldn't be using COME, but CUM. I think it'd be more appropiate and interesting. Just a suggestion, but as always this is an amazing piece.
great work :*D
your poems are
so wonderful I Really.
enjoyed them keep up
all the neat work
in the future :*).