Tease Me

Folder: 
Acrostic Poetry

C ome to me on your knees

O n the floor with a tease

M ake me moan with a kiss

E jaculation between your hips

View raila's Full Portfolio
tags:
Karyn Indursky's picture

Great poem, but I have a complaint. With the subject matter and lines of your poem along with the title, you shouldn't be using COME, but CUM. I think it'd be more appropiate and interesting. Just a suggestion, but as always this is an amazing piece.

poetvg's picture

great work :*D
your poems are
so wonderful I Really.
enjoyed them keep up
all the neat work
in the future :*).