The Big "O"

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Acrostic Poetry

O ur love shall last through thick and thin

R aging with fire that burns from within

G uided by our hearts our souls intertwine

A ccompanied by our bodies and mind

S in has no place in what we have

M ake love to me now and feel my wrath

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Joshua Chewning's picture

that was off the chain man!!!

Jen Taylor's picture

"Our love shall last thru thick and thin"
*thru is for something like "brew-thru" it is not really a word....through thick and thin

"Make love to me now and feel my wrath"
*wrath means violent anger; rage and fury
If that is what you feel in that situation that's you
But when I think of "make love" I don't think of anger.
It is hard to find a word that fits well because love is not words it is a feeling.

Cathrine Johnson's picture

Very nice... with just a splash of eroticism!