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I Miss...
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Sensual I miss the soft touch of warm hands on my chest
I miss the chance of kissing lovely sweet scented
full breast
Lord knows I miss the embrace of slender arms wrapped
around my torso as I enter inside
and the moan of joy as I glide
I miss playing the bliss of six
as my lover shines as nine
I miss the taste of candied wetness on the tip
of my tongue
I miss the unexplainable feeling of one
I miss this too. Very sexy write.
I understand this poem. Thanks for stopping and reading my poem and leaving a critique. You are a very talented writier. I enjoy your poems.
Kate
this is good. i really like it! i know what you mean/meant.
LOL....very erotic. Can almost feel it myself. That's the way I like to read, to feel what the author is writing.
Nice striaght to the point and Hot
but not obscene, more like paying homage
to to the essence missed
Your flow reminds me of a friend of mine
commonly referred to as 'Brother R.A'
he too, was the son of a Theologist
even went to school to become certified
but like yourself - it only made him search
for a deeper meaning - and what he found
went deeper than any school was willing to
teach, he would interject poetry
that was said by most - forbiden to preach
aye, his flow like unto your's
there was no stopping
Flow brother Flow
like Coltrane into the depths of our souls
ever reminding us, of the undercurrent within
is the pipers melody - scorned by many to be
death unrelenting
but in all truth - the shedding of old
and dawning anew
Flow brother Flow
do that thing you do
Much Respect, One Love