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I         sleep to dream you

feel             your thoughts

you wanting to        kiss me



taste you



I'm           dream'n new ways to please you

wanting to           subconciously give you infinite orgasms

constantly                sustain rhythmic spasms

stay                         here in my dreams

erect                           new fantasies for you and I

inside you    that is where I want to reside

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©9 October 2002 - 8:43am — raila
25 December 2003 - 12:59am — Gotalotaluv For You (not verified)
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Ok ok ok .. truth be told, I'm doing laundry and listening to old tunes and my best friend is reading your poetry and calling me over .. and the look on her face from this one? WOW .. ok .. you have our full attention now ..
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This was a really cool technique -- I was an english major in college and she teached high school english and we've never seen anyone do that .. you are truly blessed and gifted .. (and blessed .. and gifted .. and gifted and um ... well uh yanno) .. - Mar and Lynn

18 October 2002 - 8:24pm — Ang (not verified)
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can't critque..too personal, sorry.

9 October 2002 - 9:22am — Martina Meade (not verified)
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G DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMNN...baby you sure know how to turn a girl on before she gets ready to go to bed! I know what I'll be dreaming about today!

3 November 2002 - 8:38pm — Dana Jewel Harris (not verified)
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Now that is interesting....a two-for-1 deal!