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In The Lovely Quiet
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Teenage Dream In the lovely quiet behind my eyes
I see the love I need, I need
So quietly, hopefully, can the noise be growing
Echoing back and forth
Whispering your name!
I feel the embers lighting up
And all the things worth knowing
Are sifting, descending to my heart
Where, finally, I’ve been going
Grab onto the moon as it flows by
And you’ll ride ‘cross the endless sky
From night to endless night
And dusk to endless dawn
And call, and call, sweet call for light
Love goes on and on
I applaud your use of active
I applaud your use of active verbs, of the "ing" ending for some of those verbs, and for building the poem up to that triumphant, hopeful, and celebratory final line. This is an excellent poem.
Starward