open hearts

when two people open their hearts,
that is when forever starts.

to find out if you will fail or win,
first you will have to let them in.

any troubles you have will lessen,
if you let in the right person.

don't be fooled, don't be deceived,
find the one that will never leave.


you can use your brain and think all night,
but it is your heart that tells you who is right.

 

don't be content in being alone,
open your heart, use your phone.

 

someone is out there waiting for you,
someone who loves everything you do.

 

speak your mind, let everything show,
being honest is how love will grow.

 

but don't fall behind, don't wait too long,
sometimes the right one will be gone.

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bishu's picture

Excellent !!!!

Super choice of words Mr Wordsmith !! What rhyming !! A pleasure to see after scores of rubbish blank verses


©bishu 

 

punkpoet's picture

thanks alot my friend, your

thanks alot my friend, your comment made me feel like i pleased, and satisfied your intelligence. so the pleasure is all mine.

ashes_theartofburning's picture

Inspirational

words!

 

"being honest is how love will grow."

 

My favorite line,

this poem was really cute.

Well done Sir!

(^-^)


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

punkpoet's picture

thank you very much, and your

thank you very much, and your favorit line is the truest. really like your comment Cool

nightlight1220's picture

I love this! Made me smile.

I love this! Made me smile. :-)


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

punkpoet's picture

thank you nightlght, making

thank you nightlght, making smiles is why i'm here. this poem actually made me smile.  smiles are contagious!!