Dare be not deceived

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LITTLE THINGS

 

Stern, crude methodology

Seems founded mostly upon

A deception or a masking

Denying the reflection found

In the pond of starless tar

To which you need not go far

It gurgles hot in your heart

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

The antichrist won't stop

A-knocking at my damn door

And he's mad, to be sure

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Again, very impressive.  My

Again, very impressive.  My only negative criticism would be the relegation of a smaller poem to the notes section.  That poem, being written, deserves to have an equal place among your other poems.  It just does not belong in a notes/comment section.  But otherwise, both of these poems are, as is customary with your work, highly (and even eerily) evocative.


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