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Dare be not deceived
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LITTLE THINGS
Stern, crude methodology
Seems founded mostly upon
A deception or a masking
Denying the reflection found
In the pond of starless tar
To which you need not go far
It gurgles hot in your heart
Again, very impressive. My
Again, very impressive. My only negative criticism would be the relegation of a smaller poem to the notes section. That poem, being written, deserves to have an equal place among your other poems. It just does not belong in a notes/comment section. But otherwise, both of these poems are, as is customary with your work, highly (and even eerily) evocative.
Starward