Jester in the streets

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The jester in the streets

Had just finished performing 

His mad mimicking mime

His olden Midnight Muse

Wearing a silly linen hat 

Like that of a red and white dragon

He lived in a fine suite

With carpets and cherry tapestries

One belonging to the damsel

That powerful witch of substance

The lines in his mind

Become longer and longer

At every passing minute

And he decides no more will he

Dance upon the streets

Of a masked and mocking society

 
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A highly significant and

A highly significant and thought-provoking portrait that says as much about society as it does about the tragic character on the street. With moving and well-crafted images, you cleverly mix the sad and the absurd: the hat "Like that of a red and white dragon" has a bitter humor when "The lines in his mind/ Become longer and longer/ At every passing minute" (Amazing metaphorical language!) 

 

The twist that jumps out at the end is that perhaps he's not the farcical one; perhaps those "normal" people of the world passing him by are the twisted actors in our human drama. 

 

A brilliant commentary on the roles we play.