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Coy Eyes
V--- is overwhelmed; her coy eyes
reflect the Rainy Rainbow Blossoms
and vivid dance of various plants.
This Dude is like a peacock flaunting
awesome aspect painted in feathers.
She has never seen this back in city.
You choreographed the intense
You choreographed the intense attraction with casual flair, wit and a sparkling style. Every intriguing line hints at a meaningful connection ready to happen. Pure delight.
The backstory continues to
The backstory continues to build, and the implied questions continue to pile up.
Starward
"Coy"
I must thank you personally for that word.
bananas are the perfect food
for prostitutes
No thanks is neccesary, but
No thanks is neccesary, but certainly much appreciated. I continue to admire your poetry more and more. Forgive me for the delay in some of my comments---I am at a sort of "critical juncture" in my own poems, and I sometimes get too caught up in that to keep up. That is my flaw, and is not reflection upon the sincerity of my admiration for your highly artistic Poetry.
Starward