Coy Eyes

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RIVER BRIDGE

 

V--- is overwhelmed; her coy eyes

reflect the Rainy Rainbow Blossoms

and vivid dance of various plants.

This Dude is like a peacock flaunting

awesome aspect painted in feathers.

She has never seen this back in city.

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

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patriciajj's picture

You choreographed the intense

You choreographed the intense attraction with casual flair, wit and a sparkling style. Every intriguing line hints at a meaningful connection ready to happen. Pure delight. 

Pungus's picture

Thanks For Following Along

I am just happy not to be writing in gibberish anymore.

Starward's picture

The backstory continues to

The backstory continues to build, and the implied questions continue to pile up.  


Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,

unto the exultations of Heaven.

Starward

Pungus's picture

"Coy"

I must thank you personally for that word.

Starward's picture

No thanks is neccesary, but

No thanks is neccesary, but certainly much appreciated.  I continue to admire your poetry more and more.  Forgive me for the delay in some of my comments---I am at a sort of "critical juncture" in my own poems, and I sometimes get too caught up in that to keep up.  That is my flaw, and is not reflection upon the sincerity of my admiration for your highly artistic Poetry.


Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,

unto the exultations of Heaven.

Starward