Obtaining the Unobtainable

       (writing poetry)



            1

      Origin on stone.

    Pictograph's known.

   Exception to one's own.

      Geographical Zone.

   Past innovators long gone.



            2

   Progression through stages.

Utilizing scribes without wages.

   Rebus fills papyrus pages.

  Scrolls depict the next phase.

    Addressing the new age.



            3

    Alphabets of today

    Vary from yesterday.

Obtaining the unobtainable

          ray

   of a Poet's stay.

  Enabling word play.

  

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Recognition.
I am trying something different.
09/05/01

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Butch Lesley's picture

I never know what to expect from you and that is a pleasant experience

Melvin Lee II's picture

OOps...hehe, sorrie about the error up there, Linda. NAughty itchy finger of mine was at fault..i twisted and broke it already..haha. Indeed a very different style of writing here,...one which needed many more readings from me to understand. Interesting choice of words too..Smilesz, as Renee had mentioned. ;)

HAWK SQUAW's picture

I love this.... what cool idea... this one causes my brain to feel like it is on a roller coaster .... the choice of wording here is excellent thank you for sharing this one with me..... each line stands alone... yet sound so great when read with the others...