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One Aura Together

When destiny brought us together,

and fate lit our path in life thus ending

the happiness that once surrounded our auras.

Sadness darkened our doorstep and the

longer our love grows...

The further away we appear.

To live is one goal, to have life is another.

To share and feel and touch and embrace

all there is, is sheer ecstasy and then...

The light fades into...

                        THE END

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I fell in love and destiny{illness} seperated the physical closeness that we once had

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©19 December 2001 - 11:06pm — pudnsis1
20 May 2003 - 5:56am — Tim / manatee Marshall (not verified)
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GREAT ONE,i'm embarresed that i've not been around your gallery,BEAUTIFUL L&P

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Laurie Lane (not verified)
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Though saddness surrounds its core I love the feel and flow of this poem. Saddly beautiful.

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Melvin Lee (not verified)
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Definitely a bittersweet piece, Linda... I shared the sentiments of the persona before...and yes, it was heartwrenching. Take care.

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Joyce Counts (not verified)
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I can identify with this one, I would imagine that any one who has loved ,shared that love and lost that love can also identify it.THE END as you have put it seems so final. then again, what else could it be ?

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Malcolm McCaffery (not verified)
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a sad piece.