Night at the beach

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Do you hear that?

It's the ocean currents

Do you smell the entoxicating mist?

Do you feel the sun's warmth on your delicate skin?

O baby, is that your scent?



Let your hair flow gently

as I corress your every part

and slowly massage your skin

You have such a beautiful glow tonight

your skin is so smooth



What a wonderful smile you have

let me corress against your body

my baby, don't pant to hard

do you feel the warm sand beneath us?

and that slow mist touching our bodies





Can you feel my excitement today

just to be spending this time with you here

what a wonderful night it is, as we lay here tonight

baby tonight was an amazing night with you

now it's time, to release all of our happiness
















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Ashley Murray's picture

it's beautiful. don't change it. never go back to finish a poem or fix it. a poem is ment to be as is. <3