I got something to tell that girl
who my friend thought was a pearl
You said you would be there all day
So listen up to what I got to say
He wanted to be with it
The kid was hung on every bit
You treated him like trash
He was just there to bash
Girl give him a chance
All he wanted was to dance
Couldn't get it past your thick head
So he went to bed
with another girl
Who he treated like a pearl
He wanted to be with you forever
Now when will you see him, never
Cause you didn't wanna commit
So he was forced to omit
you from his life
and take on another wife
i love this poem alex; nice work
This poem is really nice. It reminds me of someone i know. well it reminds me of a lot of people...people dont appreciate things enough...well thanks for ur comment on my poem.
that was kewl n nice music
I'm sorry...
damn deep stuff...i can really relate to this poem