Perfection Poem

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My View on Society

Frustration with everyone and everything.

Why can't people be perfect

everyone always says, "O there just Human"

Well what If I said "start acting like one"

Should not humans be perfect?

We have the capacity to be

we are able to think about our actions

and realize what will happen

so then why do they do wrong?

Maybe it's not "being human"

maybe it's "being dumb"

Maybe people are just so dumb

that they dont' realize how perfect thay can be

and they use the "human" thing as an excuse

to blind them from what should be our true ultimate goal: Perfection








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My View on Perfection

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Tim Trueman's picture

Well my friend, the answer is no, we can not be perfect. We can strive for perfection, but we will never actually achieve the perfection you seek. Here is why, Their is only one entity in the universe that is perfect, and that is God. Now, while god asks us to strive for that perfection we will never achieve it, because we are only human. If we did end up achieving perfection then we would be God, and that is simply not possible. We as mere humans will always need room for improvement. None of us are perfect, if we where there would have been no reason for Jesus to have died for our imperfections (Sins).

Nell B's picture

your a sick twisted fuck. you can erase this message if it offends you, but goddamn, if imperfection never existed, then neither would perfection. just like you cant understand love if you never knew the stab of hatred. this is by far the biggest heap of bullshit that i've ever read. you should really think about it in other perspectives im really wasting my time writing this seeing as it will probably just piss you off, but if this is really how you think, then i just have to say fuck you, because your shit smells just as wicked as everyone else.