Dark Sadness

Here I am,
thinking about what I've been through.
Ain't life rough?
Sitting in the darkside of a lonely room,
which is now a sweet friend.
.

Looks like this lonely place,
is the only place where I belong.
Filled with lots of tears and dark sadness.
That's left alone for years.
Therefore got dusty,
just like you left me,
ruined my mascara,
which made me dirty and dusty.
.

Dust is the 'tears' and dark is the 'sadness'.
So, don't I belong to this lonely place?
It makes me feel better
that I am not alone to be alone.
You promised to never leave me.
This place also got promised,
to be never left,
But now it's left and cries out the dust.
.

This sweet friend shared many things with me.
I breathe, the air,
and get the smell of loneliness.
When it shares, its tears fade away,
a little.
Will I ever remove this dark sadness?
Only you can do that,
with the lights you've got,
that shine all the time.
.

If I would call up the past you in present,
past you would be like,
"I can feel you girl, I can feel you."
You could feel me.
                                                                                 -PRIYA ASTHANA                                                                         

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Hey guys! I hope you liked the poem. I'm 14 and I love writing. Thank you :)
Its about me and a lonely room. I wrote it because when he left me, I felt too lonely, I still feel, but he just doesn't care.

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bishu's picture

Looking forward to more....... my dear Priya

PRIYA

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Welcome to the wonderful site

Where none ever fight

Many a poet has inward sight

Loners always take quick flight

With these words strike the light

May your pen glow in the dark night

Loneliness'll vanish with words bite

See and feel my dear girl

Set your mind in a whirl

Convey my wishes to your young poet friend

May you both begin setting a new trend

On love and nature the favoured topics

Hatred,disbelief,rebellion another three

Break free of these and let your pen flee

Into the colourful alleys of your young mind

We old men will read and smile and unwind

 

Thank you Austromate for your beautiful comment ~Indimate~ I''ll be posting this as a poemLaughing 


©bishu 

 

bern's picture

Poem


A Sad Poem.


Is this your first attempt at writing? If it is then you have done very well


I am looking forward to more of your work. Welcome to Postpoems.org


From Bern.