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I Won't Open My Eyes Anymore

I won't open my eyes anymore.
Because as I open them, I see things ruined.

So it's better to close my eyes forever.

It won't atleast hurt me.

No I won't open my eyes anymore.
.
I'm always so glad,
when the eyes are closed.

When I'm in world of dreams.

Where everything's perfect,

where I live.

.

But as I open them,

I see everything going against my dreams

and I, then know,

all of my dreams are broken,

tears clean my eyes.

.

Tears remove the dirt, eyes see.

Why to let the dirt even touch my eyes?

Let me close the eyes forever,

and the dirt won't enter them,

and my eyes will be cleaned without tears.

.

Let me live in my dreams forever.

And I would forget the real world.

'Dream' is where everyone wants to live,

I guess that.

I won't open my eyes anymore.

.

Hope there was some way,

some way to replace dreams with reality.

But it would never happen.

Because reality is so strong that,

it breaks a lot of dreams easily.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Hey guys, as I'm still a student of 10th grade. I wrote this poem in school when I was sitting alone. When I was really sad. Well it's true that whenever I open my eyes, I see something that makes me completely depressed.

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©23 January 2015 - 6:04am — Prasdarkflames19
23 March 2015 - 4:08am — bishu
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Thank you Dear Ms Priya for being my PP friend

You have a long way to go

Great poems you will sow

The praises you will reap

Forever in your kitty keep

Never give up hope

Wake up from your daydreams

Pen whene'er your mind screams

 

Nonetheless you are a 10th grader so you need to study hard. Good luck. Best wishes Be Happy Be well Regards to your parents ~bishu~

©bishu 

 

15 May 2015 - 1:56pm — Prasdarkflames19
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Thank you, PP friend!

Hello Bishu! Thanks a lot for this. You are good at making rhymes, keep going! P.s. I love your works.
Yes I will study hard. :)