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lonely
Her soul, tormemeted by her problems
she has friends, but does she really?
she seeks for help
but it's not that easy
there are so amny options
the pain in her heart is to strong for her to think
dark thoughts take over her
she could get rid of them
only she has no one there for her
but then again does it matter?
even better, that way no one will get hurt
this girl is lost
she wants to find herself
she is very lonely
hey, maybe this girl is me
Hey you know what's funny? I just realized that this can also be a comment or a critique so in reconization of my new found info. i think this will be a comment and no critique... well i'll try. I just finished telling my friend that i'm still single and that i'm HAPPY(imagine that)i have lots of "me time" and right now i think in a way i need that. The girl in your poem seems to be lonely because she THINKS she has no friends or a guy. Which really in her words means shes lost i think she should take a few minutes every day and think about her life and what she needs to do to take control of her life. and that she is way better off than a lot of other people. well if this girl is you, i believe you can be HAPPY. mine